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Aug 7, 2009 15:03:46 GMT 7
Post by veronavrilxz on Aug 7, 2009 15:03:46 GMT 7
This thread is set up for those who would like to ceate your own story, poem and music....
Your story must be your own creation and innovation. The story character can be your favourite actors and actresses...
There is no hard and fast rules...Have Fun !!!
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Aug 12, 2009 13:02:18 GMT 7
Post by veronavrilxz on Aug 12, 2009 13:02:18 GMT 7
Mr Fighting – Part 2 – The Legend Lives On
Cast Duan Yu Qiao – Tony Sun Xie Zhi Wei Ying Qi – Zax Wang Ren Fu Ye You Li - Esther Liu (Liu Ping Yan) Dian Xiao Kui - Joanne Zheng (Zheng Zhi Qiao) Duan Yan Hao – Tang Jia Hao Duo Er – Lai Wei Ru Firebird – Liu Xu Hao He Qiu Yuan – Kenny Zhou Yi Ming San Long – Edward Huang Li Quan Gao Qian Shu – Tai Yi Ting Xie Ping – Sam Wang Shao Wei Li Zhi Xiang – Jason Hsu Meng Zhe Zhang Yu Ling – Joe Chen Qiao En
Prologue
The door of the “Fist Fighting Hall” opens and in come Duan Yu Qiao walking inside with style and Wei Ying Qi too walked in ready for a fight. While Ye You Li and Dian Xiao Kui were both in the ring waiting for their love ones.
“Will you win” ask the lovely You Li. “If you want me to win, I’ll win and if you want me to loose, then I’ll loose” Duan Yu Qiao answered with eyes looking at his lady love. Meanwhile, Xiao Kui ask “Will you win”, “It doesn’t matter to you, if I win or loose” replied Ying Qi.
The fighting begins and it ends with both of them jumped up in the air, both give their punched and their fist met.
Episode 1
While having his breakfast, Duan Yuan Bo ask “Where is Duan Yu Qiao”, “master has gone out, sir, replied the maid. Duan Yu Bo was smiling and thought to himself, very early my son has gone to ‘Fist Fighting Hall’ to look for Ye You Li. Shaking his head in remembering what Duan Yu Qiao told the father that he will marry Ye You Li when has officially taking over the task as the CEO of Duan Shi Entertainment Enterprise. At this time, Duan Yu Qiao walked in. “Good Morning, Pa” he walked over to his father to give him a hug and a kiss on the cheek. “Where have you been, so early in the morning” asked Duan Yu Bo. “I was practising with Ying Qi at the “Fist Fighting Hall” together with us were You Li and Xiao Kui” replied Yu Qiao. Yu Bo looked at his son, gave a smile and then continue drinking his coffee and reading the newspaper.
The phone was ringing and the maid quickly picked it up. “Sir, is madam”, Duan Yu Bo walked to the phone and answered the call. “Em… yes I know, what time.. ok will be there” was all he answered. “Is that Ma, pa, did she say when she and Duo Er coming back from Japan”. “Your ma and Duo Er will be coming back from Japan next weekend, so I will be going to the airport to pick them up personally”. Duan Yu Bo’s frowned, he doesn’t look very happy hearing the news that Mei Jin and Duo Er is coming back from Japan. His look, looks worried as though he fear something will happen again if they are back, but nevertheless, Mei Jin is his wife and Duo Er is still his step daughter.
“Where is my breakfast, I am very hungry le, when mom is around the breakfast will be ready on the table for me, what is taking you so long to make a simple breakfast” the shout came from the house of the Wei. Impatiently, he waited for his breakfast at the table with both his hands holding a fork and spoon, frowning and groaning. “Coming lah, can’t you just wait, why every time you must act like a hungry wolf and make me so nervous, if it’s wasn’t for you wanting me there at the “Fist Fighting Hall” this morning watching you and Yu Qiao’s practise, you would have your breakfast ready” the reply came from the kitchen. Holding a hot bowl of porridge in her hand, Xiao Kui walked out of the kitchen and laid the bowl of porridge in front of Ying Qi. “Emmmm… the porridge sure smell nice and look delicious too” and look up to Xiao Kui. “Of cause, you must know who is the cook, lah” replied Xiao Kui with a cheeky smile on her face. “Be careful is very hot, I just pour out from the pot” while Ying Qi scoop the porridge and tried to eat it. He was fanning his lips as the first scoop burnt his lips. “I told you to be careful, you are always such a gluten when come to food, can’t you eat it slowly” scolded Xiao Kui seeing that Ying Qi burnt his lips. “Where is your porridge, why are you not eating” he asked. “I’ll have my breakfast later, I’m running late” she answered him, taking off her apron and taking her handbag walking towards the staircase. “Where are you going in such a hurry” Ying Qi asked seeing Xiao Kui rushing off like that. “I’ll explain when I come back tonight, I am running late already, just put all the dishes at the sink and I will come back to wash it this evening” Xiao Kui answered while going down the staircase. Ying Qi look curious as where is Xiao Kui going and he quickly kept the bowl of porridge aside and followed Xiao Kui out.
Xiao Kui held a taxi and left, Ying Qi is still standing at the same spot watching and in deep thoughts scratching his head even though the taxi has gone for a long time. Then he sudden realised that he will be late too if the continue guessing where is Xiao Kui is going.
“Qiu Yuan, San Long, Qian Shu, what are you guys doing” You Li ask the three of them as seeing them doing some funny stuff from the room upstairs. They all turned around hearing You Li’s voice and tried to hide things that they were doing behind their back. Looking very sternly at them she said “bring out the things that you are hiding behind you guys” she extended her hand out. They looked at each other, whether to hand it over to her or not. You Li extended her hand again and they slowly brought it out from behind and put it on her hand. “What’s this” she frowned. “This is your breakfast, we went out this morning to the cake shop to buy a piece of cake for you, but unfortunately, on the way home, the cake dropped on the floor and we were actually trying to mend it” having the guilty looks on their faces. You Li opened the box and the piece of cake was crushed and with a smile she told them she would eat the cake as this is their effort. All of them smiled with a big grin.
Yu Qiao was all dressed up and ready to go to work. As he was walking out of the house the father ask him whether he would like to follow him or he would drive to the office. Yu Qiao told his father that he would like to drive to the office himself and they left the house separately. When Yu Qiao reached the office he was greeted by all the staff and he walked into in room and before he walked in he look at the door with his name “Duan Yu Qiao” pasted at the door. “I am your secretary, Ching Mei, from today onwards I’ll be assisting you, if you should have anything at all you can just buzz for me. What would you like to drink” said Ching Mei. “No thank you, I’ll be fine” came the reply.
“Excuse me, My name is Dian Xiao Kui, I am starting work today and I was asked to see Mr Duan Yu Qiao” Xiao Kui was at the reception counter giving the information to the receptionist. “Oh yes, Mr Duan Yu Qiao is already in his office waiting for you, you can go straight turn to your right, the 2nd room is Mr Duan Yu Qiao’s office” replied the receptionist with a smile. Xiao Kui followed exactly the instruction given by the receptionist and when she reached the 2nd room and was about to knock on the door, the door opened and Duan Yu Qiao welcome her in into his office.
“Emmm… you are very puncture, give me a minute and I’ll introduce you the all staff here and also will show you where you are sitting” said Yu Qiao and Xiao Kui just acknowledge with a nod. Xiao Kui was introduced to all the staff in the office and her sitting placed. “By the way, does Ying Qi know that you are starting work here today” Yu Qiao asked her. “No, I haven’t told him yet, I’ll tell him tonight after work” she replied. Yu Qiao turned to look at her in surprise and then told her that he have a surprise for her afterwards.
Xiao Kui was so busy learning some office etiquette and she was also given some work to do, she did not even have the time to notice anybody or who are people in the office walking around but just busy doing her work. Then sudden she realised that someone was standing in front of her desk staring at her and when she looked up, she was shocked to see the person standing in front of her.
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Aug 13, 2009 8:38:53 GMT 7
Post by cajuputte on Aug 13, 2009 8:38:53 GMT 7
yesterday i print out this fanfic and read in my room before night sleep....suddenly the prologue made me turn back to those sweet mr fighting story. thanks for bringing those memory back.... happy to read mengzhe & qiao en is on the list, wonder will they be a couple? yu qiao working in the office...make me surprise, i'm sure he is grow up now and can handle the company... next scene, please.... i'll be a good reader
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Aug 13, 2009 8:47:45 GMT 7
Post by veronavrilxz on Aug 13, 2009 8:47:45 GMT 7
Cajuputte Thanks for your support... next episode will be coming soon.... I really hope you will like the story.... hahahhah will not tell you the story... just like to make you chase after the story like chasing after a XZ's drama....hehehe
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Post by veronavrilxz on Aug 20, 2009 11:21:56 GMT 7
Chapter 2
“Ying Qi” she murmured his name with her eyes just staring at him not blinking. Ying Qi just smile and nodded his head acknowledging that it is him standing in front of her. “Hey, why didn’t you tell me that you are coming here to work” he asked. Xiao Kui did not answer his question but just gave a smile. “Ok lah, both of you, we will meet afterwards for lunch” said Yu Qiao and both Yu Qiao and Ying Qi walked into Yu Qiao’s office.
Yu Qiao took an envelope out from his drawer and past the envelope to Ying Qi. “What’s this” ask Ying Qi while opening the envelope and taking out the documents from the envelope and then start reading it. “Hey, this is an invitation for a friendly match, wor” said Ying Qi looking up at Yu Qiao. “Yes, is from a Fist Fighting Association named JFFA (Japan Fist Fighting Association) from Japan and the funny part is, it did not stated who is the founder of the association or the fighter’s name” said Yu Qiao. “Here clearly stated that they wanted me to be in the ring” replied Ying Qi. Both looked very curious wondering who the person that sent this invitation as all they know is the association’s name and address so that they can reply to the invitation.
“Pa, will you please hurry up, we will be late” shouted You Li at her father as the father was getting ready to out with her. “Ok lah, the market wont runaway” replied Uncle Hua. “Eh, you two, make sure you continue to practise while I’m not around, don’t think I don’t know, ah” Uncle Hua pointed at San Long and Qian Shu.
Meanwhile in Duan Yuan Bo’s office, they were discussing on the invitation that Yu Qiao received and ask his father whether they should take up the invitation or not. “We before we accept the invitation, we should check this company out and see who owns it” said Duan Yuan Bo. Both Ying Qi and Yu Qiao only nod their head agreeing with what their father said. As there was no further discussion, both of them went back to their individual office to do their work.
Xiao Kui was busy doing the task that were given to her by her superior, while Yu Qiao too was busy reading all the company’s files and trying to understand the business. Not forgetting Ying Qi too was in his own office doing the same thing as Yu Qiao. All the three of them were working none stopped. While You Li and her dad were busy buying vegetables and meat getting ready for the night’s dinner. San Long and Qian Shu too was practising hard never dare to steal a minute or two to relax.
Duan Yuan Bo intercom to Yu Qiao and ask him to gather Ying Qi and Xiao Kui for lunch. “I’ve booked a table for four at the restaurant nearby, I am leaving now, I will meet you guys at the restaurant” Duan Yuan Bo told Yu Qiao. Yu Qiao intercom Ying Qi and Xiao Kui to get ready for lunch and he himself too put away the files he was reading, meanwhile Xiao Kui too was putting her things away. Both Yu Qiao and Xiao Kui walked out to the reception area to wait for Ying Qi and together they left for lunch. They ordered their food, while waiting for their food to be served they chatted.
“Hey, both of you, you can stop practising now and help me in the kitchen” said You Li to San Long and Qian Shu. They hurriedly jump off from the ring to take all the things that You Li bought and went straight into the kitchen. They were in the kitchen washing, cutting all the meat and vegetables preparing for tonight’s dinner. While they were busy preparing the meal, Uncle Hua was standing at the kitchen door looking at them and smiling.
Lunch time was over, so the four of them went back to the office and continue doing their works, while in “Fist Fighting Hall” they too was preparing for the night’s dinner.
Yu Qiao finally finished reading the stack of files, stretching himself relieving the stiffness of his neck sitting down the whole afternoon reading the files. He looked at his watch and then he realised it was already 6 o’clock and he quickly intercom Ying Qi to inform him to packed up to go home. He went out of the door to ask Xiao Kui too to pack up as the dinner at “Fist Fighting Hall” is at 7 o’clock. They left the office together in Yu Qiao’s car and went straight to “Fist Fighting Hall” for fear that they might be late for the dinner.
When they arrived at “Fist Fighting Hall”, Duan Yuan Bo has already arrived and was chatting with Uncle Hua. “Young people, finally you guys are back” Duan Yuan Bo laughed while telling to Ying Qi, Xiao Kui and Yu Qiao. “How come when you leave the office, you never call us, pa” answered Yu Qiao. “Ok, don’t tall anymore, dinner is ready, come and eat” shouted You Li at them. All of them went to the table where delicious dishes were laid on the table.
They were happily eating, chatting and laughing. “Er.. excuse me” the shaky voice came from the entrance of “Fist Fighting Hall”, he was shivering from the coldness of the weather, looked very hungry, his dress was all torn and smelly and his face was covered with dirt. Upon hearing the voice, all of them stopped what they were doing and looked at the person.
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Aug 20, 2009 11:23:01 GMT 7
Post by veronavrilxz on Aug 20, 2009 11:23:01 GMT 7
Chapter 3
“Please forgive me if I scared you all, I did knock, but you all were busy eating, chatting and laughing and could not hear my knocking, so I have to shout to get your attention” said the shabby man. While he was speaking, San Long, Qian Shu, Yu Qiao and Ying Qi got up from their place to walk towards the shabby man. “What do you want” ask San Long. “Who are you” ask Ying Qi. “Where are you from” ask Yu Qiao. “Hey, you guys, stopped asking him all at once, how you want him to answer all your question, I don’t think he is harmful as he looked so weak” Duan Yuan Bo said to the four of them. “Now, take your time to tell us about yourself” Uncle Hua said in a very soft and caring manner to the shabby man.
“I am hungry I haven’t been eaten for days now, can I have some food and I will tell you who am I” said the shabby man. “You Li, go get a bowl and chopsticks for him” Uncle Hua ordered. “Come young man, come here join us, we can eat together” Uncle Hua told the shabby man. He shook his head and say “No thank you, I can’t be eating at the same table as you all, I am all dirty and smelly, you just give some food in a bowl and I will go and eat outside”. “Eh you there, when Uncle Hua asked you to come join us, then you come and join us here at the table” shouted Ying Qi. “If not, we won’t give you anything to eat” continued Ying Qi. The shabby man kept shaking his head, head looking on the floor and feeling ashamed. Upon seeing that he is in fear, Yu Qiao walked over to him, tap him on the shoulder and said “Don’t be ashamed, come join us at the table, when food is serve, we must always eat at the table and not outside in the cold”. He looked at Yu Qiao, tears clouding his eyes. Yu Qiao led him to the table and they sat down together to eat.
The shabby man was so hungry that once he sat down at the table he gobbled down all the food that was on the table. He continued to eat bowl after bowl. All of them were not eating but was looking at the shabby man gobbling his food. Then the shabby man stopped all of a sudden eating and looked up, so all of them quickly picked up their chopstick and continue eating.
“San Long, he is about your size, after eating, you go and get a pants, t-shirt and underwear for him and Qian Shu, you get ready the bed, pillow and blanket for him” said You Li. “After eating young man, you will have to take a bath and change your clothes, you are covered with dirt” said Uncle Hua to the shabby man.
After dinner, Duan Yuan Bo, Uncle Hua, Ying Qi and Yu Qiao proceed to the couch while You Li and Xiao Kui were clearing up the table and taking all the dishes into the kitchen to wash. Meanwhile, San Long went into his room to look for clothes and Qian Shu and Qiu Yuan preparing the sleeping place for the shabby man. Meantime, he takes his bath.
He was all cleaned up with hair washed, no more torn and smelly clothes, faced washed, to their surprise he looked very handsome indeed. He walked over to join them. “Well, now you can tell us who you are, where you came from, what are you doing here and why were you in that stage” asked Ying Qi.
“Before I start telling you about myself, I would like to thank all of you for your kindness” said the shabby man and bowing at the same time. “My name is Ting Xie Ping and my hometown is in Kenting staying with my mother. My father pass away many years ago, I am the only child at home so I leave with my mother in a small village in Kenting. Just recently, there was a landslide in my village, and my mother was one of the victims in that landslide. I have lost my mother and home, I have nowhere to go. I did not know what to do or where to go, I just walk and walk and walk for many days now. When I am tired, I will look for places like under the bridge or in the park to sleep and when I am hungry, I will just look for food in the dustbin where people can’t finish and throw away” Xie Ping explained. Ying Qi give a very disgusted look upon hearing what Xie Ping said and Yu Qiao gave a slap on his lap to ask him to stop giving that look. “The disaster happen just so fast, I was not at home during that time and my mother was alone in the house, by the time I reached home, my was already house collapsed and my mother was buried underneath” tears were flowing down his face while telling them the happening. He continued “My head went blank, I’d lost everything in few seconds”. Tears were flowing down on You Li and Xiao Kui’s face upon hearing Xie Ping’s story. “Now, I have nothing at all and no place to stay” said Xie Ping crying profoundly.
He was unable to let his hurting feeling to flow out. He was keeping it in him for so long and at last he was able to cry out loud to let all out. He continued to cry and they let him cry as he will feel much better letting out the misery in him. As he was crying so much and was very tired after walking so much, Xie Ping fell asleep on the couch. San Long took the pillow and put it under his head and cover him with the blanket. Duan Yuan Bo, Yu Qiao, Ying Qi and Xiao Kui said their goodbyes and headed for home.
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Aug 20, 2009 13:25:20 GMT 7
Post by valhalla on Aug 20, 2009 13:25:20 GMT 7
Hi Veron... Just want to tell you that you really have ability to make a story ya...four thumbs up... Make me dream that someday maybe one of the producer wants to make the next scene of Mr. Fighting and all of us can watch XZ again in fighting uniform with red hand wrap.... Jia you .....
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Aug 20, 2009 15:48:31 GMT 7
Post by cajuputte on Aug 20, 2009 15:48:31 GMT 7
Clap..clap.. Reading chapter 2 n 3 as if I really watching from TV... your descriptions were details, and they way the cast talk..it really precise with the previous script. you must be really understand each characters so well and can bring them back to live again only by reading your story. Btw, its a coincidence or what, that I found shaowei middle name had “Xie” and mengzhe middle name had “Zhi”.haha, anyway, still can't imagine shaowei with shabby look.. and I guess mengzhe is the japanese guy.. bad guy or good guy.... still wait your chapter 4...
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Aug 20, 2009 16:59:44 GMT 7
Post by veronavrilxz on Aug 20, 2009 16:59:44 GMT 7
Caju chapter will soon be here... I hope Iwont take too long this time o write out the story... Sometimes the inspiration just dont come...
MengZhe will not come that soon, it will be somewhere in the middle, maybe in chapter 7 or 8...
Hahaha same here, how I hope that a producer can read this story of mine, like it and produce a drama (dreaming again)
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Aug 21, 2009 12:49:41 GMT 7
Post by valhalla on Aug 21, 2009 12:49:41 GMT 7
Hi Veron... It's ok if you have a dream to make a real dramas which can show in a real TV programme XZ said that everything begin with a dream ....you have a big dream so do it, try it till the end Gambatte Kudasai Veron san
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Post by veronavrilxz on Sept 24, 2009 17:12:25 GMT 7
Chapter 4
"Would you like me to take the both of you home" to ask Yu Qiao Ying Qi and Xiao Kui. Qi Ying shook his head and Yu Qiao Ying Qi understood that would like to spend sometimes with Xiao Kui. As they were Strolling and slowly walking towards the bus stand, Ying Qi, thought to himself, that Xie Ping looks very familiar and where he has seen him before. "Ah, now I remembered" Ying Qi said sudden. The startled Xiao Kui, turned and looked at Ying Qi and said "Hey, are you nuts or what, you have been acting funny from the time we left" Fighting Fist Hall ", what is happening to you, do you know you startled me ". "Oh I'm so sorry" he gave a light rub on her head, "I was thinking that Xie Ping looks very familiar and I kept thinking where I've seen him before, now I remembered, I was at this place, an Fist of illegal fighting ring, we've Compete before "Ying Qi, Xiao Kui told. 'You very sure it's him, you may recognised the wrong person, is "Xiao Kui replied." I am very sure is him "answered Ying Qi to Xiao Kui and at the same time pointing his finger at her to confirm his statement." How sure are, what made you so sure it's him "asked Xiao Kui." Oh, when we were fighting, he is one Opponent that likes to hit the face, I told him many times not to hit my face, and I still remember he told me "I Like To Hit Faces", I was so angry upon hearing what he told me, I got up and gave a hard kick on his face "Qi Ying explained. Xiao Kui kept silence for a moment and then she turn to Ying Qi and said" I think we better not Assume, we better ask him tomorrow , and maybe he may not be the guy you were telling me about. If we simply just accused, and he is not the guy, it will look very stupid on us ". First time Ying Qi agrees to what Xiao Kui said, he gave a smile and took her hand and they continue their journey home.
The mobile phone of You Li vibrated on the dressing table, she hurriedly got up from the bed to answer her phone. She flip the phone open and see who is the caller, smiled and have guessed it was Yu Qiao who call her. "Hello, still not a sleep yet" asked Yu Qiao. "Do you think I will take your call, if I am asleep ', answered You Li and continued with" What a stupid question to ask ", Yu Qiao over the other side laughed out loud." Have you reached home or are you still on your way home ", she asked." I've already reached home, I missed you so much, so I thought I give you a tingle, we did not have a chance to be alone just now "said Yu Qiao." You know the dishes that you cook tonight is just so delicious, I wish to eat it every night after work, would you cook for me every night: "Yu Qiao said very softly over the phone." If you like to eat so much, you can come to "Fighting Fist Hall" every night to have dinner here, who is stopping you "answered You Li smiling shyly as she knows what Yu Qiao meant by those words he said." Aiyoh stupid, did you get my meaning ah "Yu Qiao was a little twitchy by the way she answered him but he was not angry." Hey, why you calling me stupid, why, you think I did not know what you were trying to tell me "she Paused with a smile" uh. .. is this a proposal "she asked shyly." What if I now tell you, yes, it is a proposal, will you marry me "softly the words was transferred from his side of the phone into her ears. You Li gave a very cheeky smile but of coz Yu Qiao can not see the cheeky smile and she answered him "No, I will not marry you". The immediate shock Qiao Yu sat up from the bed and asked "Why are you not Accepting my proposal", You Li on the other hand was a little agitated and she told him "I do not mind not having a bouquet of flowers or a ring when you Propose, but I do mind, if you Propose not standing in front of me". Upon hearing her answer, Yu Qiao was laughing and said "I was just joking with you just now, truly tonight's meal is really delicious, and I truly want to eat your cooking every night, but you know right, I have to keep my promise that I have to concentrate on the business and I did promise you that the day I am the CEO of the company is the day of our wedding, you do understand, right "." Of cause I understand, I am not the one who started it, it is you, I'll support you all the way "said You Li with a little Disappointment but deep down in her heart she would not want to BURDEN Yu Qiao. With this, they end their phone conversations and said their goodnights.
Duan Yuan Bo was in his study room who still figuring this Xie Ping and what is his motive coming into "Fighting Fist Hall." Dad, you still have not sleep yet, is already very late "asked Yu Qiao. Duan Yuan Bo was so deep in his thoughts he did not even heard the door open and was startled when Yu Qiao spoke." Huh .. what did you say "answered the stunted Yuan Bo." Dad, what were you thinking, you did not even hear me knocking on the door and you did not even know that I am came into the room "asked the curious Yui Qiao." Oh nothing, just some complicated work that I encountered today at work, nothing important "Yuan Bo answered Shaking his head and walk over to Yu Qiao tapping on his shoulder and asked Yu Qiao to go to sleep and not to worry. But left Yu Qiao the room feeling very curious, what is troubling his father. Yu Qiao knows that, once his father is troubled by something, he will be deep in thoughts. He thought to himself, is already late in the night, he would once again ask his father what is troubling him in the morning closing the door slowly but with the click of the door, Duan Yuan Bo heard and guest it must be Yu Qiao. He quickly got up and went to Yu Qiao's room, "Are you asleep?" knocking the door. Yu Qiao opened the door and said "Dad, you are not asleep yet?" "No, my son, did you came into my room just now?" Ask the father. "I did, I knocked a few times but there were no answer and I saw your lights were on, I guest that you have not sleep yet, so I just opened the door and I saw you deep in thoughts "he answered. Curiosity once again runs through his head and he ask" Dad , is something troubling you, what is it, would you like to talk about "with one MOUTHFUL." Which do you want me to answer you first, you asked so many questions at one go? "His dad ask with a smile on his face. After hearing his father question, Yu Qiao broke out into laughter too.
"Oh, you came looking for me, what is it" ask the father. "Dad, if someone wants to break a promise for the betterment of others, that someone can break it?" The question made her father Frown and wondering what his son was trying to ask him. "Can you please do not beet around the bush and be direct with it, do not let me guest what you are trying to say" said Yuan Bo. "Dad, I promise You Li that I will get married to her once I get promote to the CEO" but before he can finish his sentences he was rudely interrupted by his father "You mean to tell me now, you do not want to marry You Li "? "Aiyoh Pa, I have not been finished, I was about to tell you I want to marry her now, I can not wait until the promotion" he said it with a little blush on his face. "Oh, you scare the wits out of me, I thought you have changed your mind, do what you feel is right, my son, you know pa will always support your decision" Bo Yuan answered with a big grin on his face. "Is already very late now, I think I will go to sleep now, you too sleep now, you are a big boy now" while tapping his son on the shoulder, gave a cheeky wink, a thumb up and then Walked to the door .
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Sept 24, 2009 17:47:07 GMT 7
Post by veronavrilxz on Sept 24, 2009 17:47:07 GMT 7
Thanks for the support and sorry for the late reply le....I will finish this story anyway.... I know it will take along time for me to finish it, but I really must thanks to you and Caju for being so supportive and being so patience waiting for the next chapters to come....
I dare not have big dream... but after this, I will try to write a story on my own... no part 2 from any of XZ's drama.... hahhahaha this will be my "GOAL"...
Happy reading
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